LGBTQ Book Reviews

The Terracotta Bride

I was surprised by this novella, it had a lot going for it for such a small package and can easily be read in one sitting. It was imaginative and gave me a lot to think about, I’ve never read anything like it and I honestly wish that it could have been a little longer.

Due to the length of this story, I was disappointed to find that the eternal life conspiracy mentioned in the synopsis was pretty lacking. There is a brief explanation into the theory of what it could do but it was both confusing and did not feel like it was developed enough. The idea is interesting and it could have been a good plot point in a longer story, but for a short like this it just felt unnecessary. There is also a distinct lack of character development for exactly the same reason, the characters are a little stiff and there is not much growth outside of the mild romance, which I must stress this isn’t really a romance novel.

“Rebirth entailed a true death, the severing of one’s memory and the loss of one’s self.”

Now what the story did right, however, was the world building and exploration of philosophical topics about traditional Chinese marriage, religion, the afterlife, and reincarnation. The afterlife in this book draws a lot from Taoist beliefs about ancestor worship and the cycle of reincarnation, contrasting this version of the afterlife to the Christian one. Siew Tsin died young and found herself married off to the richest man in Hell, where the souls of the dead bribe their way to a comfortable afterlife–avoiding atonement for their sins and dodging the wheel of reincarnation as long as they can.

So what would hell look like for a young Chinese woman? Apparently it would look a lot like the real world, trapped in a more traditional marriage where women are often sold off to an older patriarch and join a household with multiple wives. While she’s been given another chance at life after death, is it really the kind of life that she would want to live? It’s no wonder that Siew Tsin finds companionship in the strange new bride that her husband brings home, a terracotta bride crafted to learn and become a perfect wife.

The Terracotta Bride is an absolute gem and an exemplary work of short fiction by a refreshing new voice. Besides my mild gripes about the length and a few editing errors this novella was damn near perfect and was hard for me to put down.

Title: The Terracotta Bride
Author: Zen Cho
Publisher: Self Published
Publication Date: March 10, 2016
Pages: 51
Format: Ebook
Source: Purchased

A tale of first love, bad theology and robot reincarnation in the Chinese afterlife.

In the tenth court of hell, spirits wealthy enough to bribe the bureaucrats of the underworld can avoid both the torments of hell and the irreversible change of reincarnation.

It’s a comfortable undeath … even for Siew Tsin. She didn’t choose to be married to the richest man in hell, but she’s reconciled. Until her husband brings home a new bride.

Yonghua is an artificial woman crafted from terracotta. What she is may change hell for good. Who she is will transform Siew Tsin. And as they grow closer, the mystery of Yonghua’s creation will draw Siew Tsin into a conspiracy where the stakes are eternal life – or a very final death.


  • Jennifer

    When I finish my current book I will totally buy this up and read it. I wish I read this review two days ago- I could of bought it and read it in the car from my trip yesterday. Oh well. I love novellas, I think they are much harder to write than a novel BECAUSE you have so little space to develop characters and story. You really need to be concise.

    • Jamie

      I agree wholeheartedly, I love short fiction and the authors that can write short stories and novellas well are masters with pacing and characterization.

      It’s also glaringly obvious when an author isn’t well practiced with short fiction. I was reading a short story collection recently that was a huge collaborative effort with over a dozen authors , most are well known for writing trilogies. Some of the stories were decent, it felt like they were putting in too many details and writing a story that would have needed a longer form, so nothing was developed well.

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